August 14, 2012 
Today’s challenge is to write a haiku about the colour blue. Even though I’ve never written a haiku, I know that there are 2 versions – Japanese and English. Seeing as which one wasn’t specified (and after looking it up, the Japanese one sounds much more complex) I think I’ll go with the easy option for today 🙂
A vibrant addition to the rainbow
Colour of your eyes
Both will shine brightly in the sun
So, there it is. I think I’ve written it correctly. If there are any haiku enthusiasts and/or experts I welcome your critique! Please contribute your own haiku about the colour blue 🙂
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I’m all about the 5-7-5 haiku. Never venture outside of it.
That said, I liked it!
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Cool, thanks! 🙂
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Blue a Cool Shade
Color of my Shirt Today
Until Coffee Spill
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heh heh, nice one 🙂
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So lovely and cool,
Azurine waters splashing my feet
Take me deep within
My first haiku, Vee – really had to flex those poetic muscles! xoM
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Thats brilliant Margarita, well done! 🙂 xx
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